OMG Page 4 done!!! This was like the hardest piece of this whole project so far... I has such a damn hard time with it, such a paint, gah
Reference: Ash to ash Project: Book 1 - Metamorphosis, Episode III: Evolve, Page 4.
The Action: Okay, this comes after the page where Ash tells about how he realised he has evolved... Christie loves the idea of ash turning into some superiour hybrid creature, Kayne is far more sceptic... It was time to bring some humour into this sorta tragic story. And of course Christie wonders what happened to Ash's horns, but that part you already know... or if you don't - head on to page 5!!
Various Comments: This page is totally different from what yuou might have seen earlier. It takes place in the Ivory city, where Ash has met Christie and Kayne and tells them a bit of his story... so the lighting/color cheme and mood is totally different. The white frame background means it happens in teh present of the plot, the black one - in the past.
Cool beans. Dear lord your colors are beautiful. My suggestion would be to lower your white stroke by a point or two. And spell check alert..Add an "I" to make it "idiot" not "diot"
Your really good and expressions. I couldn't help but smile when Christie went chasing Kayne and she was all furious with her eyes bulging and glowing yellow with her teeth showing. She is quite a bubbly, happy character. You know the types that get annoying after awhile so I won't be surprised if her and Kayne get into any more quarrels.
Can't wait for the next pages.
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Love Me or Hate Me is An Obssesion
Love Me or Hate Me that is the Question
If you Love Me
Then Thank You
If you Hate Me
Then Phuck You!~ Lady Sovereign
Devious Comments
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mnah mnah doo doo do do do!
I'm loving it so far.
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"Even in darkness a keen spirit discovers light."
just a note, try not to use hyphens, like on the third frame when christie says awesome, makes it had to read at first glance.
Can't wait to see what happens next
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FANTASY JUST DECLARED WAR ON REALITY!
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Ahem, don't click this, you've been warned.
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Ahem, don't click this, you've been warned.
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Somewheree was a sun. Means somewhere was a shadow.
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Ahem, don't click this, you've been warned.
Can't wait for the next pages.
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Love Me or Hate Me is An Obssesion
Love Me or Hate Me that is the Question
If you Love Me
Then Thank You
If you Hate Me
Then Phuck You!~ Lady Sovereign
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