Right...
I am highly interested in what you would say about the idea of purchasing the comic book I am actally working on right now (a look at my gallery, if you have no idea what I am talking about).
If you
are willing to -
why?Otherwise -
why not?What is that you
like about the pages I have posted?
What is that you
don't like?Any possible improvement - in terms of
script,
plot,
Layout and the
looks of it??
Please feel free to share your thoughs

The Pages available so far:

This is not a commercial project. For the moment.
I highly doubt it will ever be printed and available for purchase,
But hey, who knows?
Thank you for your feedback! 
Devious Comments
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Heaven's Not Enough (c) *starluver
I think i would buy it, to enjoy the art work and of course find out what happens!
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Currently open for commissions starting at $5.00 each. See my page for more info.
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anyhoo, dA should give gratis subscriptions to the folks who make this place worth looking at...
like you.
But yay thank you, this is very encouraging^^
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Ahem, don't click this, you've been warned.
I think you're strong points are definatily your colouring. But maybe if you upload more pages, and get people more interested in your characters, they'll be more willing to fork out the cash for it later on :3
Hope that helps!
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[link] blog
As far as I've seen, the story is very interesting and and engaging. The colors work well, and everything looks nice. You're doing a good job with it. ^___^
Of course, since there aren't too many pages (for an understandable reason) I can't really say the script sucks.
It would be awesome if you published it one day. I'd definately buy a copy/volumes.
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"If this is all a dream, don't wake me up."
yay:
-lineart and characters are nice and interesting, I like your character's expressions
-flow of panels works well for me, it's not all over the place and overdone <3
-the fonts you use are nice :3
-the last panel of page 3 is awesome
nay:
- the way you colour skintones most of the time. They seem muddy and not the same quality as everything else (the dragonic limbs, the backgrounds, etc.)
-page 2 doesn't look like you spend as much time on it as the other pages.
Please don't think that I'm being rude or asking you to change to fit my preferences, but I know you can take critiques well even negative ones. I tried to explain it in a nice way, but forgive me if it came out insulting or anything
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True artistic talent is the ability to pursue your goals and not give up until you succeed, whether it is on the second or seventieth try.♥
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