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Would you get my comic book?

Journal Entry: Wed Apr 9, 2008, 6:37 AM
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Right...^^;
I am highly interested in what you would say about the idea of purchasing the comic book I am actally working on right now (a look at my gallery, if you have no idea what I am talking about).
If you are willing to - why?
Otherwise - why not?
What is that you like about the pages I have posted?
What is that you don't like?
Any possible improvement - in terms of script, plot, Layout and the looks of it??
Please feel free to share your thoughs :nod:

The Pages available so far:



This is not a commercial project. For the moment.
I highly doubt it will ever be printed and available for purchase,
But hey, who knows?

Thank you for your feedback! :aww:

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I would by it!! :3 Why? Well becuz I like your art style and just from one page I was interested in what would happen next. So, yup!! I would totally buy it! :)

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I had a look through your pages you had uploaded, I like the virbrance of the coloring and the lines were really good as well. Layout wise I found was easy to follow, as well as the script so far, but I have only seen the three pages (unless there was more and I missed them) So I couldnt comment really about the script, form what I have seen It seems fine.

I think i would buy it, to enjoy the art work and of course find out what happens! :)
Yes I would... I love your art and characters :)

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i'd prolly get it for the art at this point...but i think you have a story to tell...i'd like to have a sense that you had an idea of that story havinf some structure, key plot points, some twists etc ...which i think you do have an idea about...just as we learn to draw there are also anatomies of stories and dramas...three act, five act structures, character functions, etc...but, yeh, i would buy it whatever, trusting it would form together on the way...

anyhoo, dA should give gratis subscriptions to the folks who make this place worth looking at...

like you.
There are only three pages for the moment, yes, I'm slow ^^;
But yay thank you, this is very encouraging^^

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I'd really love to buy it if there was a possibility and I had a job (still looking). I wanna know the story and your style is so nice for my eyes ^^
I think I would buy it if it was easily available :3 Of course, it's hard to say because I know very little about your ability to tell stories...and sometimes 'how' a story is told is as important, if not more so, then the art.
I think you're strong points are definatily your colouring. But maybe if you upload more pages, and get people more interested in your characters, they'll be more willing to fork out the cash for it later on :3
Hope that helps!
I would be willing if I ever found if on a shelf or at a con when I had money. otherwise I really try to avoid buying stuff online, just a personal thing.

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I would love to buy it.
As far as I've seen, the story is very interesting and and engaging. The colors work well, and everything looks nice. You're doing a good job with it. ^___^

Of course, since there aren't too many pages (for an understandable reason) I can't really say the script sucks. :heart:

It would be awesome if you published it one day. I'd definately buy a copy/volumes.

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"If this is all a dream, don't wake me up."
It's hard to tell if I would buy it since there's only a few pages out. But from what I've seen, here's what I liked and disliked:

yay:
-lineart and characters are nice and interesting, I like your character's expressions
-flow of panels works well for me, it's not all over the place and overdone <3
-the fonts you use are nice :3
-the last panel of page 3 is awesome :XD:


nay:
- the way you colour skintones most of the time. They seem muddy and not the same quality as everything else (the dragonic limbs, the backgrounds, etc.) :(
-page 2 doesn't look like you spend as much time on it as the other pages.

Please don't think that I'm being rude or asking you to change to fit my preferences, but I know you can take critiques well even negative ones. I tried to explain it in a nice way, but forgive me if it came out insulting or anything :heart:

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~KitsuneDemon1:iconKitsuneDemon1:
GREAT ARK WORK!! Your gallery is quite interesting ^_^ keep it up :P
Wed Jul 1, 2009, 5:02 PM
~lisabarcq:iconlisabarcq:
Tu devais pas aller te coucher tôt et ne pas browser l'intertoile jusqu'à point d'heure, toi ? Ne crois pas qu'on ne t'as pas vue ! :p
Tue Jun 9, 2009, 2:19 PM
~Kiratari:iconKiratari:
Wow, nice gallery you've got here, VERY interesting style, so mystical...
Fri May 22, 2009, 10:52 PM
~Ashramito:iconAshramito:
you've got some good piece of art here, keep up the good work !
Mon May 18, 2009, 7:41 AM
~Gau-chan:iconGau-chan:
You´re comic is really interesting!!!!
Sun May 17, 2009, 12:13 PM

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